Ah, I also love the collaborative brainstorming, and actually, the overall outline was excellent. If you remember, there was a scene where you were scared about what Wei Ying Sizhuiye and Jingyi Zizhene would do, but then you thought about what their older brothers would do to you, something like, "You stole their younger siblings," I don't remember exactly, but the main story is already there, you can find the full version there. Anyway, I think this encounter, or whatever you want to call it, would have had a small place in the plot.